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Your elected officials need to hear from you. Whether it is a formal letter, a quick postcard, an email, or Facebook post policymakers depend on receiving information and guidance from their constituents and other citizens when deciding how to vote on important issues.
Keep it brief
The most powerful messages are sincere and written from your personal perspective and in your own words. Generally a few sentences or brief paragraphs are the most appreciated. Communications should be limited to one issue. Staff and policymakers read many communications on many issues in any given day so your letter should be short and to the point.
State Who You Are and What You Want Up Front
In the first sentence tell your elected official that you are a constituent. Identify your name and address. You should also clearly identify the issue about which you are writing. If your letters pertains to a specific piece of legislation, it helps to identify it by its bill number (HB/SB ___) or simply state the issue in general terms.
- Example: Dear Senator, My name is Jane Smith and I live in your district at 111 Rainbow Lane on Kauai. I am writing to you about HB 5 to make our employment practices more fair. I urge you to support these values and this important bill.
Hit your three most important points
Choose the three strongest points that will be most effective in persuading policy makers to support your position and flesh them out.
- Example: I encourage you to support this bill because it impacts me and my family, it is important to our economy, and fairness is a value we all hold dear.
Bring a Paper about Your Issue and Action You'd Like Taken
Leave this paper with your elected official or staff. Tell your elected official why this legislation matters to you, your family and your community. Feel free to briefly share your personal story. Policymakers use these stories in debate and in making up their mind about how to vote. This is about educating your elected officials to see things from your point of view.
Personalize your relationship
Have you ever voted for this elected official? Have you ever contributed time or money to his or her campaign? Are you familiar with her through any business or personal relationship? If so, tell them. However, you don't have to be a big donor to make a big difference. In fact sincere personal stories are always the most powerful.
You are the Expert
Always be courteous and to the point. Don't be afraid to take a firm position. Remember policymakers are learning on the job too. You have a valuable experience and expertise that helps them learn and cast their vote wisely. Don't use all caps and don't use profanity under any circumstances.
Additional Tips
- Dress professionally.
- Be prompt and patient.
- Keep it short and focused! You may have as little as 10 minutes if you meet with your legislator. Make the most of that brief time by sticking to your topic and talking points.
- Bring up any personal, professional or political connections that you may have to the elected official.
- Provide personal and local examples of the impact of the legislation. This is the most important thing you can do in a lobby visit.
- Saying “I don’t know” can be a smart political move.
- Take the ‘Yes’!
- Set deadlines for a response. Ask when you should check back in to find out what your elected official intends to do about your request.
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